The Shocking

Horror 00:06:59

 

Logline: A challenged child, guided by his grandmother’s ghost, electrocutes people using his bike helmet.

Director: Chris Giovingo

Writer: Joshua A. Cohen

Producer: Joshua A. Cohen

 

Produced for the National Film Challenge, 2008.

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FADE IN:

 

CREDITS OVER:

 

DARREN GORDON (8, challenged) sits at his desk, installing

electrical wires in a bike helmet.  GRANDMA stands behind

him and pats his head.

 

END CREDITS

 

INT. OFFICE - DAY

 

Darren sits in the office of his father, STEWART GORDON

(40ish).  Darren draws the murder scene.  Stewart talks to

CARL PRESCOTT, a young client.

 

                         STEWART

            Don't worry, Mr. Prescott.

 

                         CARL

            How can you say "Don't worry?" I've

            been working 5 years for that

            retirement nest egg, and now it's gone!

 

                         STEWART

            This is just a market correction.

            You have nothing to worry about.

            Your retirement isn't going anywhere.

 

                         CARL

            That's because it's already gone.

 

                         STEWART

            Trust me, Carl.  It'll be okay.

 

Frustrated, Carl storms out.

 

                         STEWART (CONT'D)

                    (muttering)

            You're so fucked.

 

He sees Darren and puts a smile on his face.

 

                         STEWART (CONT'D)

            You ready to go, sport?  Remember

            you're gonna go play with Ricky

            today.  And then your Grandpa's

            gonna pick you up.

 

Darren doesn't acknowledge him.

 

                         STEWART (CONT'D)

            Okay, let's go.  Wanna hold my hand?


 

                                                            2.

 

 

Darren still doesn't look at him.

 

Stewart gives up, then walks out.  Darren follows him.

 

INT. RICKY'S HOUSE - RICKY'S BEDROOM - DAY

 

Darren plays by himself in a room with RICKY (6).  Ricky's

mom, LUCILLE, stands at the door, watching with a little

pity.  She shakes her head and walks away.

 

Grandma enters.

 

                         GRANDMA

            Darren.  It's time.

 

Darren gets up.  Ricky keeps playing, doesn't see Grandma.

 

INT. RICKY'S HOUSE - BATHROOM - SAME

 

Darren enters the bathroom, finds Lucille on the toilet.

 

                         LUCILLE

            Darren!  You scared me.  I'm using

            the bathroom.  Could you come back

            later?

 

                         DARREN

            Grandma says I'm supposed to play

            with you.

 

                         LUCILLE

            Darren, get out!

 

Darren nods, hands her his helmet.  She considers it.

 

                         LUCILLE (CONT'D)

            Okay.  I'll play for a minute, but

            then you need to give me some

            privacy, okay?

 

Darren nods.  She puts the helmet on.  He pulls the remote

and presses a button.

 

INT. RICKY'S HOUSE - RICKY'S BEDROOM - SAME

 

Ricky sees the lights flicker, hears Lucille SCREAM.

 

EXT. RICKY'S HOUSE - BATHROOM - SAME

 

Darren stands over Lucille's crumpled, smoking body.

Grandma enters


 

                                                            3.

 

 

                         GRANDMA

            Darren!  You know you can't do this

            to people you know.

 

                         DARREN

            But you told me to!

 

                         RICKY (O.S.)

            Who are you talking to?

 

                         GRANDMA

            Don't worry.  I'll clean this up.

            You go play.

 

                         DARREN

            Okay.  I love you, Grandma.

 

                         GRANDMA

            I love you too, baby.

 

INT. RICKY'S HOUSE - RICKY'S BEDROOM - SAME

 

Darren stands over Ricky, who's still playing.  Suddenly

Darren swings his helmet down, BLUDGEONING Ricky's head.  He

hits him twice more, then puts the helmet on Ricky.

 

INT. GORDON HOUSE - NIGHT

 

Darren, Stewart, SALLY and GRANDPA eat dinner.

 

                         SALLY

            So how'd it go today?

 

                         STEWART

            Oh, you know.  Same ol'.

 

                         SALLY

            That bad, huh?

 

                         STEWART

            I wish there was something more I

            could do for them, but this market

            is killing me.  I just can't figure

            out how to save them.

 

Grandma stands in the doorway.  She shakes her head and

moves off.

 

Grandpa gets up, walks to the pantry.

 

                         GRANDPA

            Hey, Stewart, where'd you say those

            prunes were?


 

                                                            4.

 

 

                         STEWART

            Top shelf.

 

                         GRANDPA

            Thanks, kiddo.

 

Grandpa opens the pantry, looks up to the top.  He doesn't

see that Ricky lays dead at the bottom.

 

EXT. FLOODWAY - DAY

 

Darren and Grandma walk along the floodway.

 

                         DARREN

            I don't understand.  Why won't

            anyone play with me?

 

                         GRANDMA

            You'll make them play with you.

            Just like I taught you.

 

                         DARREN

            Why?

 

                         GRANDMA

            People are just like that.  Now

            it's important to only play with

            people you don't know.

 

                         DARREN

            Why?

 

                         GRANDMA

            Because I'm your grandmother, and

            I'm always right.  Stop asking

            questions.

 

They see HOMELESS HARRIET going through a pile of trash.

 

                         GRANDMA (CONT'D)

            Now go play with her.

 

Darren shrugs and walks over to her.

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            What do you want?!

 

                         DARREN

            I want to play.

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Can't you see I'm busy?


 

                                                            5.

 

 

                         DARREN

            Why are you digging through trash?

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Because I lost everything in the

            stock market, okay?

 

                         DARREN

            What's the stock market?

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Leave me alone, kid.

 

Darren walks over and pushes her over.

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET (CONT'D)

            Hey!

 

                         DARREN

            I want to play.

 

Harriet finally gets scared and moves off.  Darren follows

her.  She starts panicking and running.  He runs after her.

Finally break into the first scene:

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Why are you following me?

 

                         DARREN

            I just want to play.

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Really?  That's it?

 

Darren nods.

 

                         HOMELESS HARRIET

            Well, okay.  What do you want to play?

 

                         DARREN

            Here.

 

Darren takes off his helmet and gives it to her.  He

triggers the remote control.  She convulses and dies.

 

Grandma walks up and pats him on the head.

 

INT. GORDON HOUSE - NIGHT

 

The family and Grandma watches TV.  Stewart works on his

laptop.  Grandpa snoozes


 

                                                            6.

 

 

                         STEWART

            I can't believe I did this to these

            people.

 

                         SALLY

            They'll be alright... You'll be

            alright too.

 

                         STEWART

            Yeah.

 

Sally rubs her belly.

 

                         SALLY

            Stewart, there's something we need

            to talk about.

 

                         STEWART

                   (absent)

            What's that, dear?

 

She looks at Darren.

 

                         SALLY

            Not here.

 

Stewart looks at Darren, nods.  They walk upstairs.

 

                         GRANDMA

            Darren, you know that father of

            yours is no good.  I never trusted

            him.  And his clients shouldn't

            have either.

 

                         DARREN

            I know, Grandma.

 

Grandpa, drowsy, wakes up.

 

                         GRANDPA

            Wha?  Grandma?  Yeah, I miss her too.

 

He drifts back to sleep.

 

                         GRANDMA

            Come on.

 

She gets up and walks THROUGH the couch.  Darren follows.

 

INT. OFFICE - DAY

 

Stewart sits at his computer, sweating.


 

                                                            7.

 

 

                         STEWART

            No... no, no!

 

Grandma sits next to Darren.

 

                         GRANDMA

            You know your mother's pregnant.

 

                         DARREN

            What does that mean?

 

                         STEWART

            What?  Darren, I'm sorry.  I don't

            have time to explain this.

 

                         GRANDMA

            It means you're going to get a

            little brother or sister.  You'll

            have someone who can help you play

            with all these people.

 

                         DARREN

            Okay.

 

                         GRANDMA

            Now go play with your daddy... one

            last time.

 

                         DARREN

            Okay.

 

He walks over.

 

                         GRANDMA

                   (clearing her throat)

            Aren't you forgetting something?

 

She nods toward the helmet.

 

Darren nods, walks over, picks up the helmet, then walks

back to Stewart.

 

                         DARREN

            Daddy, I love you.

 

                         STEWART

            I love you too, Darren.

 

                         DARREN

            I want to play.

 

                         STEWART

            Darren, sweetheart, I really don't

            have time.


 

                                                            8.

 

 

                         DARREN

            I want to play.

 

                         STEWART

            Later.

 

                         DARREN

            I want to play.

 

                         STEWART

            Enough already!

 

Darren hands him the helmet.  Stewart looks at it, grudgingly

takes it from him.

 

                                            FADE OUT.

 

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